tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post3731647946537238215..comments2023-08-27T04:22:55.468-07:00Comments on The Literary Lab: "LLAC EMIT DOOG A ROF" by Jason KingUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-52956866706400197042010-01-28T13:21:44.703-08:002010-01-28T13:21:44.703-08:00This is a very artistic piece. Different from any...This is a very artistic piece. Different from anything else I've read. Good work.Franceshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17386873033119766709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-85597419765788301482010-01-26T18:52:46.649-08:002010-01-26T18:52:46.649-08:00Thanks to everyone for your comments. I'm bot...Thanks to everyone for your comments. I'm both humbled and proud. But mostly I'm just glad you enjoyed my story.<br /><br />--Jason KingJabezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09541471929373540252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-65959597543883495432010-01-26T13:10:49.878-08:002010-01-26T13:10:49.878-08:00Amazing. I feel reborn reading his words, this po...Amazing. I feel reborn reading his words, this post. Like a foreigner in a strange literary land. And I like it.*https://www.blogger.com/profile/06484208765656281917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-68035645093896449332010-01-26T11:50:40.544-08:002010-01-26T11:50:40.544-08:00Very clever. IIRC this approach is called the '...Very clever. IIRC this approach is called the 'pathetic fallacy', yes? I got what the object was straightaway but the gradual revealing of its point of view and 'realistic' sensory limitations is neat. The description of what it sees (but without human understanding which we have to supply) is easy to visualize... kind of painterly. I think you struck the right balance of close descriptiveness and spareness. And it _sounds_ good when read aloud. Bravo.BK Broylahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17950145216671450522noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-33483548108592695702010-01-26T09:28:26.976-08:002010-01-26T09:28:26.976-08:00I really admire Jason for writing this story. It&#...I really admire Jason for writing this story. It's an extensive exploration, and he managed to turn it into a work of art.Davin Malasarnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09385823575081492949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-66808836093727854092010-01-26T07:35:19.202-08:002010-01-26T07:35:19.202-08:00Your story is brilliant, Jason, and I don't do...Your story is brilliant, Jason, and I don't doubt that your novel is great, as well. It sounds like it's right up Scott's alley. :)<br /><br />Thank you for sharing with us!Michelle D. Argylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09696465137285587646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-48850377230294554452010-01-26T07:25:30.887-08:002010-01-26T07:25:30.887-08:00It seems I'm always echoing Piedmont Writer, b...It seems I'm always echoing Piedmont Writer, but yea, ditto- This was really interesting. <br /><br />At first, I thought the POV was a water fountain, then a sink, but a mirror certainly makes more sense and a public bathroom creates loads of possible scenarios. Very cool! Thanks for making me think.sbjameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06986950185596914217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-41790284421102578152010-01-26T07:07:46.443-08:002010-01-26T07:07:46.443-08:00This was really interesting. Complex. I didn'...This was really interesting. Complex. I didn't get it until I was half-way through it but when I did, wow! What a COOL thing to write about. Great Job!Anne Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05816355522284492131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-84037189478514119922010-01-26T07:00:26.091-08:002010-01-26T07:00:26.091-08:00I really enjoyed reading this, great job!I really enjoyed reading this, great job!Rick Daleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173516899130463413noreply@blogger.com