tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post6507954704351301388..comments2023-08-27T04:22:55.468-07:00Comments on The Literary Lab: Friday! Filler! An Excerpt!Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-23547704072209794302011-12-19T09:35:28.172-08:002011-12-19T09:35:28.172-08:00I like the catkins and the egg yolks! That's b...I like the catkins and the egg yolks! That's brilliant! My story has been rolling around in my head, but I haven't gotten any words out yet. This morning, I will. This morning!Davin Malasarnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09385823575081492949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-11780331897963934352011-12-18T22:27:24.751-08:002011-12-18T22:27:24.751-08:00Michelle: I need to finish my story (or at least a...Michelle: I need to finish my story (or at least a first draft of it) before I read any of the contest entries. I also need to do something for Loren's Advent Ghosts thing.<br /><br />Donna: Send, send, send it to us!<br /><br />Chuck: Send, send, send it to us!<br /><br />Yvonne: I have about the first half of mine written. I know what the ending is, but I don't know how (or why) to get there from where I am.scott g.f.baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05726743149139510832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-36066988945143854362011-12-18T08:20:23.579-08:002011-12-18T08:20:23.579-08:00Love the description of the thousand yellow cones....Love the description of the thousand yellow cones.I have a rough draft with no ending but two weeks. I have two weeks, right?Yvonne Osbornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18212188414972694795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-48825569798634976162011-12-18T07:02:21.362-08:002011-12-18T07:02:21.362-08:00Done, critiqued and in the final polishing stages....Done, critiqued and in the final polishing stages. Good luck to all entrants.Chuck H.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07266126276487521854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-29976955087026625682011-12-17T21:04:00.511-08:002011-12-17T21:04:00.511-08:00This post should have come with a scratch-and-snif...This post should have come with a scratch-and-sniff chamomile button. Or something.<br /><br />The description is vivid.<br /><br />My submittion is being critiqued by my writers group tomorrow. I'm chewing my nails with nervousness . .<br /><br />.........dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-88168956193885834532011-12-16T16:58:32.629-08:002011-12-16T16:58:32.629-08:00Oooo, melikes. Such lovely nature descriptions lik...Oooo, melikes. Such lovely nature descriptions like you were talking about in your earlier post. <br /><br />And you should know that you don't have to have your story ready by the deadline since we know ours are going in the very back for those interested in reading them. This means you can play around with it until the time I am formatting the book, which could be awhile even after we choose entries to go in... Then again, if you want to hold yourself to the deadline, that's fine, too. I really need to get mine written soon.Michelle D. Argylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09696465137285587646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-23565085819447030982011-12-16T16:54:30.050-08:002011-12-16T16:54:30.050-08:00Cynthia: Thanks! It's a little clunky, but I s...Cynthia: Thanks! It's a little clunky, but I still have plenty of time to revise. I am trying to write in something like Chekhov's mature style, but of course it all comes out sounding like me.scott g.f.baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05726743149139510832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-23932400299866767872011-12-16T16:20:58.294-08:002011-12-16T16:20:58.294-08:00I thought that was quite lovely.I thought that was quite lovely.Cynthia Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14595677706434920552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-721615523347343742011-12-16T15:50:37.022-08:002011-12-16T15:50:37.022-08:00I don't own it!I don't own it!scott g.f.baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05726743149139510832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2092805684169371138.post-63338497319189469212011-12-16T15:44:14.051-08:002011-12-16T15:44:14.051-08:00Yes, I agree, catkins is a great word. Mind if I ...Yes, I agree, catkins is a great word. Mind if I borrow it?Anne Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05816355522284492131noreply@blogger.com